The grief that takes your breath away.
Red-orange-purple stains the sky
at sunset. Animals die. Children.
Awake all night or not. Pitch
your tent at the southern edge
of Lake Superior on a beach
strewn with ice. Listen to the ice
chunks still in the bay click together
in wind. If you can stand at dawn,
let the endless sky take you.
I don’t like the sound of “chunks” but what the hell choice to you have? Otherwise, very nice.
Bty, after looking and looking for Haans Johst in translation, I finally found some. He was the poet laureate of Nazi Germany and responsible for the famous: When I hear the word “culturer” I reach for my gun” falsely attributed to Goering. The stuff I found was hideous and mindless, and yet, he was purported to have been a great poet, which is how he got the post. Two things are clear: first, there isn’t much in National Socialism as rendered by Nazis to get poetic about and is limited to a very forced rhetoric. Second, when a poets get desperate enough for work or money, they are capable of strange behavior. Re “chunks” pocks, shards, frozen junk, clutter, breakage, cracked, crazed, fragments. “chunks” remain an honest descriptive. I just wish it didn’t sound like “clunk.”